Critical notes
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| 1. Tant’alto s’erge la tua chiara luce | RISM A/I: C 1517: m. 8, Canto: nuova |
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| 2. Nov’amor nove fiamme e nuova legge | m. 3: nova | ||
| 3. Leggiadra pastorella in treccie d’oro | mm. 3–4: vidd’io Tenore, m. 17: tec’io |
Canto, m. 3: the sharp is not repeated on the C Canto, m. 20: the natural is not repeated on the B Canto, m. 23: the C is a D Canto, m. 24: the B half note is not dotted Canto, m. 29: “nel” for “mel” Tenore, m. 3: Allhor Tenore, m. 4: no accidental at the cadence Tenore, m. 17: tec’io |
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| 4. Se voi set’il mio cor, la vit’e l’alma | mm. 6 and 12: Dhe | m. 5, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the C mm. 6 and 12: Dhe, except the Tenore, m. 6, which reads Deh mm. 8 and 14, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the C mm. 9 and 15, Canto: the sharp is not repeated on the C mm. 9 and 15, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the F |
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| 5. Clori gentil’e bella | m. 4, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the F mm. 20 and 27, Canto: the sharp is not repeated on the second C |
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| 6. S’ogni mio ben havete | m. 3, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the C | ||
| 7. Amorosetto fiore | m. 32, Canto: the F-sharp is an A | m. 3, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the second F m. 24, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the second F m. 32, Canto: the F-sharp is an A |
RISM B/I: 1567-16: Attributed to “Madalena Casula” All voices: ¢ instead of C m. 3, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the second F m. 24: the first F is not sharped m. 32: the first C is not sharped |
| 8. Morir non può il mio cuore | m. 3, Canto, Tenore: core mm. 8–10, Canto: fuori mm. 16–24, Canto, Tenore: moreste, except at the first occurrence, which reads morreste in the Canto |
Canto: the B-flat in the signature is placed on the third line mm. 7–10, Canto, Tenore: fuori mm. 20 and 25, Tenore: the second F is not sharped |
RISMvB/I: 1566-2 All voices: C instead of ¢ m. 3, all voices: core m. 4, all voices: e ucciderlo mm. 7–10, all voices: fuori m. 14, Canto: desioso instead of desio m. 14, Canto: The word “So” is omitted on the first C4, the syllable is moved to the end of the preceding word m. 17, Tenore: the sharp is placed after the B mm. 19 and 24, Tenore: the sharp is placed after the B m. 20, Tenore: the sharp is placed after the second F mm. 16–20 and 22–24, all voices: moreste, except at the first occurrence of the Canto, which reads morreste mm. 21–22, Canto, Alto, Tenore: moresti m. 23, Canto: the sharp is placed after the B m. 24, Tenore: the first F is not sharped I-CMs, MS.E.1 follows the Canto reading of RISM B/I: 1566-2 with the exception of: mm. 3–4: cuore mm. 16–20: spelling standardized for moreste m. 14: the "So" misplaced is corrected mm. 23–24: the accidentals are correctly positioned m. 23: the second C is sharped |
| 9. Sculpìo ne l’alm’amore | m. 3, Canto: s’ardente | mm. 2–3, Canto, Tenore: imagin m. 3, Canto, Tenore: s’ardente m. 9, Canto: the second F is not sharped |
RISM B/I: 1566-2: All voices: C instead of ¢ mm. 3–4, Canto, Tenore and Basso: s’ardente mm. 5–6, all voices: abrugia m. 8, Tenore: the natural is placed after the B and not before m. 9, Canto: the first F is not sharped mm. 12–13 and 18, all voices: “di morte” instead of “a morte” m. 13, Basso: the C on the first beat is a B m. 14, Alto: text-repetition sign (“ii”) incorrect I-CMs, MS.E.1 follows the Canto reading of RISM B/I: 1566-2 |
| 10. Vedesti amor giamai di sì bel sole | m. 11, Canto, Tenore: E ’n quell’ m. 11, Tenore: the first F is a G mm. 13–15, Canto, Tenore: radoppiar mm. 19–20, Canto, Tenore: “di” instead of “d’i” |
m. 11, Canto, Tenore: E ’n quell’ m. 11, Tenore: the first F is a G mm. 13–15, Canto, Tenore: radoppiar mm. 19–20, Canto, Tenore: “di” instead of “d’i” |
RISM B/I: 1566-2: m. 6, Alto: the sharp is placed after the F, and not before m. 11, all voices: quell’ m. 19, Canto: the first C is not sharped I-CMs, MS.E.1 follows the Canto reading of RISM B/I: 1566-2, with the exception of: m. 12: Arde instead of Arder |
| 11. Sì chiar’e dolce fiamma | mm. 9–10: drama mm. 16–19: sogget’ |
mm. 6–7: Chiara in lowercase mm. 10–11, Canto: the natural is not repeated on the B m. 23, Canto: the last G is a minim, not a semiminim |
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| 12. Va liet’a mort’il core | mm. 4–5, Canto: sottrasi | ||
| 13. Fredd’è la donna mia | m. 1: Fred’è giaccio for ghiaccio at all occurrences of the word |
m. 12: si stia | |
| 14. Donna bell’e gentile | m. 12: Credel m. 24, Tenore: the second semiquaver is a B instead of an E |
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| 15–18. A caso un giorno mi guidò la sorte | Prima parte: m. 19: piagh’era Seconda parte: m. 28: cespugli’ Terza parte: mm. 51–52: dopò Quarta parte: m. 72: sugando mm. 73–74: begl’occh’il |
Prima parte: m. 14, Canto: giovine m. 19: piagh’era Seconda parte: m. 28: cespugli’ mm. 36 and 40–41, Canto: the sharp is not repeated on the C m. 41, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the F Terza parte: mm. 51–52, Canto: dopò mm. 62–63, Canto: the sharp is not repeated on the F m. 64, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the F Quarta parte: mm. 73–74: begl’iocchi ’l m. 91, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the G |
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| 19–20. Eran Teti e Giunon tranquill’e chiare | Seconda parte: m. 1: Tet’e |
Prima parte: m. 1: Tet’e m. 21: nube mm. 24–25: Febo |
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| 21. Come esser può che ’l core | Canto, m. 4: the F is an A | Tenore, m. 4: the sharp is not repeated on the F | |
| 22. Se scior si ved’il laccio a cui dianz’io | m. 3, Tenore: the F is an E Canto: ¢ instead of C mm. 11 and 16–17, Tenore: disgrati’ mm. 12 and 20, Canto, Tenore: “a” instead of “ha” |
Canto: ¢ instead of C m. 3, Canto, Tenore: dinaz’io mm. 11 and 16–17, Tenore: disgrati’ m. 3, Tenore: the F is an E mm. 16 and 21: the second C is not sharped |
RISM B/I: 1566-2: m. 3, Canto: diant’io m. 11, Tenore: the sharp is placed after the C and not before mm. 11 and 16–17, Canto, Tenore: ringrati’ mm. 11 and 16–17: A, B: disgrati’ m. 15, Basso: the D4 is a C4 mm. 16 and 21: the first C is not sharped |
| 23. L’aver l’aurora che sì dolce l’aura | m. 6, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the C | ||
| 24. Occhi dolci occhi cari occhi soavi | mm. 2–4: dolc’occhi car’occhi | mm. 2–4: dolc’occhi car’occhi m. 14, Tenore: the sharp is not repeated on the second G |
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| 25. Ahi lassa! Io sent’il core | m. 22, Canto: languiscie; Tenore: languisci’ | mm. 15–16, Canto: the sharp is not repeated |